✅ Urgency has been created by saving some money.
❌ The body copy may be the headline. This means it’s too short
❌ The body copy of the Ad is unfinished. Why’s that?
❌ A fancy image is not enough to persuade me your CRM is better. Why’s better? ❌ They’re talking about themselves. They don’t take the time to connect with you, the customer.
❌ They’re not exposing their flaws, making their strong points more credible.